Saturday, 15 October 2016

Progress Crit Peer Feedback

Feedback
I was surprised how much feedback I received as I wasn't really sure which of these developed drawings were successful or not. But the feedback has been really helpful for me determining where I want to take this work next:
Positive:
Characters are strong 
Composition works well
Clear layout/message
Improvements:
Start considering colour
Stay away from type 
Play with the size of things in the frame for more dynamic composition 
Going forward:
We now have to streamline these sketches further into six final ideas, two for each format. I want to properly start considering which colours best bring out the tone of my editorials, as colour is something I can often leave to the last minute, but here I need to have colours in mind before I start on the final designs. 
I'm also going to move my compositions around to compare different ways of presenting the image inside the small frame we've been given. 





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